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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Letter Writing
Formal Letter asking for informations
Hello,
I'm not a native english person and I have some struggles regarding phrasing construction. I want to send a formal letter asking for some informations, but I found "Google Translator" a bit faulty, so I was hoping to get some help here.
Here's the letter so far, what do you think?
Good Day,
I come in this way require information about your products. We are a company from the commercial area of sale of skins and substitutes in Portugal. Our sales areas cover the entire area north and center of Portugal and focuses on up in the three major areas of footwear, including Felgueiras, Alcanena and São João da Madeira. We found an increase in demand for fur, either by quality and of differentiation and meeting to meet this demand we need new partnerships to complement our market. Taking into account all these factors, we are in market research in order to find a partner supplier of raw material that meets our needs. To this end, sending catalogs and / or samples and prices in order to verify their suitability to our market would be necessary. Of course, after this phase and if your products will meet our expectations, would gladly our travel to your premises in order to strengthen relations.
My regards.
I'm not a native english person and I have some struggles regarding phrasing construction. I want to send a formal letter asking for some informations, but I found "Google Translator" a bit faulty, so I was hoping to get some help here.
Here's the letter so far, what do you think?
Good Day,
I come in this way require information about your products. We are a company from the commercial area of sale of skins and substitutes in Portugal. Our sales areas cover the entire area north and center of Portugal and focuses on up in the three major areas of footwear, including Felgueiras, Alcanena and São João da Madeira. We found an increase in demand for fur, either by quality and of differentiation and meeting to meet this demand we need new partnerships to complement our market. Taking into account all these factors, we are in market research in order to find a partner supplier of raw material that meets our needs. To this end, sending catalogs and / or samples and prices in order to verify their suitability to our market would be necessary. Of course, after this phase and if your products will meet our expectations, would gladly our travel to your premises in order to strengthen relations.
My regards.
Top answer
I am not completely clear about what exactly you want to say. But let me attempt to tidy up your letter. Here is how I would word it: Good day: I would like some information about your products.
- I am not completely clear about what exactly you want to say.
- But let me attempt to tidy up your letter.
- Here is how I would word it: Good day: I would like some information about your products.
- We are a company active in the commercial sale of skins and substitutes in Portugal.
- Our sales area covers the entire north and central Portugal and focuses on the three major areas of footwear production, including Felgueiras, Alcanena and São João da Madeira.
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I am not completely clear about what exactly you want to say. But let me attempt to tidy up your letter. Here is how I would word it:
Good day:
I would like some information about your products. We are a company active in the commercial sale of skins and substitutes in Portugal. Our sales area covers the entire north and central Portugal and focuses on the three major a
Good day:
I would like some information about your products. We are a company active in the commercial sale of skins and substitutes in Portugal. Our sales area covers the entire north and central Portugal and focuses on the three major a
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