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Joseph A Posted 6 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Formal Letter And Composition

Hello everyone,

Could you please correct the mistakes?

University of Sulaimani

Faculty of Education and Humanities

/Saidsadiq

Department of History/Evening/First Year

Below, there is a short report in English "2019/2020"

Subject: personal information

Name of the Student: Joseph A

Name of the supervisor: Ilham Ahmed

The start

Hello dear teachers,

Please look at this short report. When I wrote it I was helped with it. I hope I will continue with you in the next years to expand my knowlege.

Regards,

Joseph

1. I'm Joseph A and I was born in 1981in a village named "Taparash", which belongs to Saidsadiq town in Sulaimani.

2. From 1990 to1991, I started to school before the Kurdish uprising against Baath regime. After returning to Saidsadiq from Brayati refugee camp, I finished primary, middle and high school grades in Saidsadiq.

3. In 2004, I passed 12th grade. Then in 2006, I graduated from Teachers' Institute.

4. On 29/11/2006, I was recruited as teacher at "Sham Elementary School" and in 2007 I was promoted to be the head of that school. I have been working there since then.

5. In 1997, I became a member of Kurdish Students Group. I worked with orgsnization for 10 years. In the first election for the representative of that organization in 2001 I was the representative.

6. My hobby is serving and protecting environment at any governmental installation because environmental problems are global nowadays. Everyone should try to protect it zealously.

7. My aim is to take care of the education field and grow the seed of loyality in the heart of everyone and have cooperation with each other. When get into any position of power, we should serve the people of our country prsctically and we shouldn't be biased.

8. I was not a reader of books, but I returned to study at university to become a friend of books.

P.S. Someone sent this report in Kurdish and asked me to translate into English. Please help me because it should be ready by 7:00 am. Now it's 12:57am.

P.S2. By "Evening", I mean some students study at university in the evening.

  

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1. I'm My name is Joseph A and I was born in 1981 in a village named Taparash, which is near the town of belongs to Saidsadiq town in Sulaimani. 2.

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  • I'm My name is Joseph A and I was born in 1981 in a village named Taparash, which is near the town of belongs to Saidsadiq town in Sulaimani.
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  • From In 1990 to 1991 , I started to school before the Kurdish uprising against the Baath regime.
  • In 1991 , I returned to Saidsadiq from the Brayati refugee camp.
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1. I'm My name is Joseph A and I was born in 1981 in a village named Taparash, which is near the town of belongs to Saidsadiq town in Sulaimani.

2. From In 1990 to 1991, I started to school befo

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Joseph A1. I'm Joseph A and I was born in 1981in a village named "Taparash",

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Joseph Ato become a friend of books.

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