Formal letter

I am writing a letter to the editor of our school magazine regarding my issues I feel on the magazine. Please check this out and please do tell if there are any errors.

Editor

(Name of school)

(Place)

(Date)

Subject: Issues Arised in the School Magazine

Sir/madam,

I would like to acknowledge your support on considering my poem literary work for the upcoming school magazine. But I would also want to remind you that this work of mine is an original and I wouldn't want any editing on my poem or any poems in particular. Last time, two years ago, my poem that I gave for the magazine was edited and I was disheartened to see that it has been edited.

I kindly request to not edit nor omit any word from my poem and if you wish to do so, then I wouldn't want my work to be published. I hope you would consider this and publish my poem as I have given.

Regards,

(Name)

(Signature)