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Kak Serwan Posted 9 years ago
Grammar
Formal Letter
Could you help me to correct this formal letter please?
When the medical doctor calls our main office for the transportation of medical waste, we sent a special pick up to the waste. After the pick up arrives to our main office we call Nana Kalli hospital to manage an appointment as soon as possible. After we arrange it the waste will be put in incinerator medicines.
When the medical doctor calls our main office for the transportation of medical waste, we sent a special pick up to the waste. After the pick up arrives to our main office we call Nana Kalli hospital to manage an appointment as soon as possible. After we arrange it the waste will be put in incinerator medicines.
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I made it a little better by cutting some minor mistakes. I didn't understand what you meant by the highlighted part. Kak Serwan When the a medical doctor calls our main office for the transpor ting of the medical waste, we se nd a special pick up to the waste for it .
- I made it a little better by cutting some minor mistakes.
- I didn't understand what you meant by the highlighted part.
- Kak Serwan When the a medical doctor calls our main office for the transpor ting of the medical waste, we se nd a special pick up to the waste for it .
- After the pick up arrives to our main offic e, we call Nana Kalli hospital to manage an appointment as soon as possible.
- After Then we arrange it the waste will be put in an incinerator.
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I made it a little better by cutting some minor mistakes. 
I didn't understand what you meant by the highlighted part.
I didn't understand what you meant by the highlighted part.
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Probably:
Then we arrange it and the waste will be put in an incinerator.
Then we arrange it and the waste will be put in an incinerator.
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KhoshtipManwill be put in an incinerator.This is awkward. It would be simpler and more natural as will be incinerated.
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AnonymousThis is awkward. It would be simpler and more natural as will be incinerated.You may be right to some good extent. But there is some policy I use for correcting the texts as far as I can. It is, I don't want to change the framework of the sentences they use when they are not incorrect.
I would rather let them to make reviews, maybe some time lat
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