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Nikoo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Formal Letter

Hi,
Could you please check the following email?

Dear Ms. Nelson,

Thanks for your email. I have prepared my transcripts, degree certificates and translations. My TOEFL iBT score has expired (99/120, test date: 21 Nov 2009) and I'm going to take the test within a few weeks. Could you please tell me if it is possible to submit my new score after the deadline?

Yours sincerely,
Name

Do you have any suggestions?

Thanks for your help and time.

Nikoo
  

Top answer

Dear Ms. Nelson, Thanks for your email. : in this context -(she isn't a friend) - 'thanks' seems too informal.

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  • Dear Ms.
  • Nelson, Thanks for your email.
  • : in this context -(she isn't a friend) - 'thanks' seems too informal.
  • Thank you for your email.
  • I have prepared my transcripts, degree certificates and translations.
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Dear Ms. Nelson,

Thanks for your email. : in this context -(she isn't a friend) - 'thanks' seems too informal.
Thank you for your email.

I have prepared my transcripts, degree certificates and translations. My TOEFL iBT score has expired (99/120, test date: 21 Nov 2009), and I'm going to take the test wit
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Thank you so much for your detailed explanation Emotion: smile

I really appreciate it.
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