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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
Formal email to an university. Check mistakes
It's formal email (querry) to university. Could anyone check it ? I'd be greatful.
It's here:
My name is Adam Smith. I am applying to the University of Brema on the following course: xxx. You have received my application on 23rd March but I have not received results so far. Could you tell (?) me when application will be considered ?
I would be glad if you could let me have information on this.
Of course, if you have not a vacancy for this course, please send me more details about other.
Yours faithfully.
It's here:
My name is Adam Smith. I am applying to the University of Brema on the following course: xxx. You have received my application on 23rd March but I have not received results so far. Could you tell (?) me when application will be considered ?
I would be glad if you could let me have information on this.
Of course, if you have not a vacancy for this course, please send me more details about other.
Yours faithfully.
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Hi, My name is Adam Smith. I am applying to the University of Brema on the following course: ***. You have received my application on 23rd March but I have not received results so far.
- Hi, My name is Adam Smith.
- I am applying to the University of Brema on the following course: ***.
- You have received my application on 23rd March but I have not received results so far.
- ) me when application will be considered ?
- I would be glad if you could let me have information on this.
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Hi,
My name is Adam Smith. I am applying to the University of Brema on the following course: ***. You have received my application on 23rd March but I have not received results so far. Could you tell (?) me when application will be considered ?
I would be glad if you could let me have information on this.
Of course, if you have not a
My name is Adam Smith. I am applying to the University of Brema on the following course: ***. You have received my application on 23rd March but I have not received results so far. Could you tell (?) me when application will be considered ?
I would be glad if you could let me have information on this.
Of course, if you have not a
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Hi,
In my experience, 'Yours faithfully' is rarely used these days. It looks quite old-fashioned to me, and totally inappropriate in a modern form of communication such as email.
Clive
In my experience, 'Yours faithfully' is rarely used these days. It looks quite old-fashioned to me, and totally inappropriate in a modern form of communication such as email.
Clive
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