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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

Formal email introducing a firm

HI

I am wondering if the following context is formal ?

'Greetings,
Based on our telephone conversation, we are glad to introduce you our latest sales history as well as a list of items which we are able to supply to our customers. Please feel free to keep in touch with us about any of your business related requirements/queries, especially precision instruments and electrical/mechanical equipments.
We look forward to a wonderful relationship together and success for all concerned.
Thank you for considering us for your purchasing needs.
Sincerely, '

Thanks in advance for any correction you may make Emotion: wink
  

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Hi I am wondering if the following letter is a formal letter, 'Greetings, Based on our telephone conversation, we are glad to introduce you our latest sales history as well as a list of items which we are able to supply to our customers. Please feel free to keep in touch with us about any of your business related requirements/queries, especially precision instruments and electrical/mechanical equipments. We look forward to a wonderful relationship together and success for all concerned.

  • Hi I am wondering if the following letter is a formal letter, 'Greetings, Based on our telephone conversation, we are glad to introduce you our latest sales history as well as a list of items which we are able to supply to our customers.
  • Please feel free to keep in touch with us about any of your business related requirements/queries, especially precision instruments and electrical/mechanical equipments.
  • We look forward to a wonderful relationship together and success for all concerned.
  • Thank you for considering us for your purchasing needs.
  • Sincerely,' Thanks in advance for any correction you may make to this letter.
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Hi

I am wondering if the following letter is a formal letter,

'Greetings,
Based on our telephone conversation, we are glad to introduce you our latest sales history as well as a list of items which we are able to supply to our customers. Please feel free to keep in touch with us about any of your business related requirements/queries, especially precision instruments and el
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AnonymousI am wondering if the following context is formal ?
Too much so, unfortunately. Try this:

Dear Mr [surname],

I have attached/enclosed our most recent sales history and a list of items we supply to our customers. Please contact us about your requirements, especially precision instruments and electrical/mechanical equipment.

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