Appositives (both restrictive and non-restrictive) are normally noun phrases ( My ancestor, Eric the Red ). What you have created are adjective phrases or clauses: People , [who were a group] mostly consisting of men in their 30s and 40s, danced... A boy, [who was] tired and hungry, ran home to...
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