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K.Shankar Posted 21 years ago

Forgiving the past.

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00Encouraged by the responses I got for my previous post, I am presenting my second contribution to the Forum. Needless to add, comments are most welcome. 02br
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00If you are seeking 02br
00forgiveness for the past, 02br
00Find the place where 02br
00the past seems to exist and 02br
00notice it is 02br
00Empty.. 02br
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00If one looks and sees nothing 02br
00but vast space, forgiveness 02br
00has already been granted, and 02br
00dark clouds of guilt evaporate 02br
00in the sky of mercy. 02br
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00Thanks & Regards 02br
00Shankar 0-
  

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0 This was very inspiring. very glad you shared. 0-
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0 Beautiful meaning! Keep going.... 0-
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0 I like the rhythm of the first 6 lines; the last 5 lines seem a little weaker. Do they make the thought too explicit, I wonder? 02br
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0 A good one KS. But a suggestion, 02br
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00If one looks and sees nothing 02br
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00maybe this should be deleted as it is the same idea as 'empty' and so seems repetitive. Just a suggestion that you could begin the second stanza with ... 'then forgiveness has been granted..." Or you could try, "then the emptiness
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0 Yes Mr. P, I too get a similar feeling now.. May be I was hard concentrating on bringing my thoughts to its logical conclusion, which rendered it to be noticeably explicit. 02br
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0 Thanks Anita. Mr. P has also been echoing the same sentiment. Yes I realise it now.. 02br
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Dear Mr.Shankar,

I would love to hear more from you. Keep writing... you canl do wonders.

Regards,
Venkat
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