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Trystwithmyheart Posted 21 years ago

For who I am

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00For who I am 02br
00Not what I was, 02br
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00Know me now 02br
00For who I try to be 02br
00Not what I could be, 02br
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00Know me now 02br
00As the one who gives 02br
00Not as the one who takes 02br
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00Know me now 02br
00As the one who loves you 02br
00Not as the one who forgot to love 02br
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00Know me now 02br
00As the one who became strong 02br
00Not as the one who was weak 02br
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00Know me now 02br
00As the one who will remain 02br
00Not as the one who ran away 02br
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00I wrote this after reading Anita's poem "know me now". Thank you anita. 0-
  

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0 Tryst, I really like this poem. [L] 0-

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  • 0 Tryst, I really like this poem.
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0 Tryst, I really like this poem. it sounds like a person growing into maturity and recognising 01i00themselves02i00 as well as appreciating their lover for the person he/she is.[L] 0-
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0 The gradual change of line-lengths has an interesting (cumulative) effect. 02br
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0 Thank you for taking the time to read. As for the line lengths it just happened that way but I did notice it when it was done. Thank you again MrP. 0-
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0Now you know me and I know you.05002br
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00It is nice to know that the title of my poem inspired you to write a poem. And thanks for acknowledging... 02br
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00I liked your poem... Beautiful words and subtle message. 010id2
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0 Yeah, that's really striking. I like the wording and the rythm of it. It could make a good song by the way! 02br
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00Good luck Tryst050010id5
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