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Beatrix Posted 20 years ago

for someone i thought i could trust

Thou

Honor...
Is it all thou have been looking for,
Thirst for attention,
Attention thou lure on,

Not a topic thou could speak,
But why thy made me look so weak,
Talked bad with thine beak,
Like a tile suffered from its leak,

Forgive my harrasment,
Instead of giving thee compliment,
For thy had awaken a mad from its lament,
When thou could only speech 'bout the hymen,

Seduction,
Confusion,
Hardly I now believe in thee,
Thou had ruined our one called we,

Put off thine mask,
It's too plastic yet just wax,
Being nice, confess to a preach,
saying I'm a whore but thyself is a bitch


  

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The use of the archaic 'poetic' forms of thees and thous sounds very odd when they are the only examples of this sort of language, and when the rest of the poem is modern in its language and topic.

  • The use of the archaic 'poetic' forms of thees and thous sounds very odd when they are the only examples of this sort of language, and when the rest of the poem is modern in its language and topic.
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The use of the archaic 'poetic' forms of thees and thous sounds very odd when they are the only examples of this sort of language, and when the rest of the poem is modern in its language and topic.
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so do you think we cant combine the old and modern art together? i thought there's nuthin flouted in art...but thanks for the comment =) I'll keep up my work Nona the Brit...gracias =)

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