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Angliholic Posted 19 years ago
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for producing to math, reading, and science performance

Out of 141 nations, a study found the world's greenest, most livable place is Finland ... The Finnish education system got high grades, too, for producing top math, reading, and science performance.

Is it identical to say "making/doing top math, reading, and science performance? Thanks.
  

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I don't like the original. "Producing performance" is not very natural. "For producing to performers in math" may be okay.

— BarbaraPA

  • I don't like the original.
  • "Producing performance" is not very natural.
  • "For producing to performers in math" may be okay.
  • "For excellent performance on standardized math tests" is definitely okay.
  • " At least, not to my ears.
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I don't like the original.

"Producing performance" is not very natural.

"For producing to performers in math" may be okay.

"For excellent performance on standardized math tests" is definitely okay.

But not "producing top math performance." At least, not to my ears.
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Grammar GeekI don't like the original.

"Producing performance" is not very natural.

"For producing to performers in math" may be okay.

"For excellent performance on standardized math tests" is definitely okay.

But not "producing top math performance." At least, not to my ears.

Thanks, GG.
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