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Kiast Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

For my back biters

I'm pretty wondering why some people wants me to put me down.this has become very troublesome for me. why they love to critisice me and make non sense issue. did i do something wrong? please help me God to oversome this negative feedbacks about me. i don't need to make myself become innocent for them to respect me..

------please correct my paragraph and make some suggestions for this and if you want to extend it more . yes you can..thanks in advance!!!!
  

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Hello, kiast — and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised paragraph here.

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  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Please try to correct them and post your revised paragraph here.
  • this has become very troublesome for me .
  • why they love to critisice me and make non sense issue .
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Hello, kiast — and welcome to English Forums. I have underlined some problem areas. Please try to correct them and post your revised paragraph here.

I'm pretty wondering why some people wants me to put me down.this has become very troublesome for me. why they love to critisice me and make non sense issue. did i do something
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sorry i don't have any idea what to put here. huhu, i can't correct . i tried but i can't. better u revised it for me if u don't mind.
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i'm wondering why some people want to me down. This has become very troublesome for me. Why they love to critisize me and making non sense issue. Did i do something wrong? Please help me *** to overcome this negative feedback about me, Perhaps I don't need to tell how innocent I am for them to respect me.
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I'm wondering why some people want to put me down. This has become very troublesome for me. Why do they love to criticize me and making non sense issue. Did I do something wrong? Please help me, ***, to overcome this negative feedback about me. Perhaps I don't need to tell them how innocent I am for them to respect me.
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I'm wondering why some people want to put me down. This has become very troublesome for me. Why do they love to criticize me and making non sense issue. Did I do something wrong? Please help me, ***, to overcome these hissing callous remarks about me. Perhaps I don't need to tell them how innocent I am for them to respect me. -please h
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I'm wondering why some people want to put me down. This has become very troublesome for me. Why do they love to criticize me and making non sense issue. Did I do something wrong? Please help me, ***, to overcome these hissing, callous remarks about me. Perhaps I don't need to tell them how innocent I am for them to respect me. -
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> Why do they love to criticize me and making non sense issue.

Why do they love to criticise and create senseless issues for me?

Hope that helps!
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yah thanks you so much ,it helps me a lot.. what you're name by the way?
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You're welcome. I'm Josh.
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