For MountainHiker and anybody else that can help

I have carefully read your request regarding different types of letter. I have to send a motivation letter for University and the fact is i have nobody to ask for help. Of course I have searched the internet, but I would really appreciate some "live" opinion, if possible.

Thank you very much for your time.

The letter is:
In attention to the Admission Board


Dear Sir or Madam,

in today’s world, terms as “European integration”, “global governance”, “European union” play a very important role. In this context we are now taking about a process of constitutionalisation of International Law, the development of a body of extra-statal law and with effects in large a diversity of fields, from economical to political, from human rights to environment. Due to these facts, it is an essential experience to obtain high-level of proper education and to experience other educational and scientific systems to be able to understand other points of view when cooperating in an international team.
I consider that by attending the Master of European Studies within HWP I will enrich my knowledge regarding European integration and all other aspects regarding it.
I graduated within Academy of Economical Studies in Bucharest and my choices of subjects reflected the diversity of my interests - English, Marketing, Management, Finance, Informatics, Customers’ Protection and Economics. I also worked during this period, but these extra-curricular experiences have provided me with a balance for the rigorous school works and strengthen my willingness in having a quality work result and good academic results.
As you can see from my CV, after graduating I continued improving my skills by attending to different courses and obtaining different certifications.
I realize that I have a major impediment for being admitted to this master, by not having yet a certification for German language. But as you can see form my firm academic background as well as a solid track record of work experience, I am a very determined person and with a great capacity of work. I already have an A1 Exam (2+) and by August I’ll have the “Zertifikat Deutsch”.
There are three specific reasons for applying to study at Euromaster, HWP. Firstly, I wish to receive a high-quality education and the orientation of Euromaster program satisfies my passion for global communication, international mobility and multicultural environment, as well as my impulse of organizing and leading projects, in a professional way .Secondly, I hope to take full advantage of the knowledge obtained here while the political environment in my country is changing (Romania is about to be accepted in EU in 2007). Last, but not the least, I’ll be living in Germany for the next 5 years (due to my husband’s job) and attending your master program will give me a keen inside into German culture, society and educational system and a better understanding of the country and its people.
I believe that the combination of my past experiences and academic knowledge will qualify me as an Euromaster student candidate, and furthermore will prepare me to achieve my career goals in the future. Learning is what I do best, and in Germany I will have the perfect opportunity to excel at it.
Thank you for taking the time to consider my application. I look forward to a positive response and to a great time in an outstanding educational program at the Master of European Studies, HWP.

Sincerely yours,
Daniela Ionescu