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Threepod Posted 21 years ago

For J.

0 I am no poet 02br
00But I'll write it. 02br
00Here in my heart 02br
00There is a dart 02br
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00The blood then flows 02br
00Drenches the woes 02br
00In all that ruby 02br
00Your eyes I see 02br
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00I see your hairs 02br
00And all your fairs 02br
00Your lips I dream 02br
00Your hands touch me 02br
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00Your little nose 02br
00Like a fresh rose 02br
00Tickles my cheek 02br
00Oh I could weep 02br
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00I can't reach you, 02br
00I can't love you 02br
00Would all my love 02br
00Die if I dove 02br
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00Into the sea 02br
00The deep cold sea? 02br
00Not breathe again 02br
00Not hurt again 02br
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00In the far land 02br
00Where I will land 02br
00Justine will be 02br
00There to hold me. 0-
  

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0 Very well written. Though Sad, very well put thoughts into words. 0-

— Anita_a

  • 0 Very well written.
  • Though Sad, very well put thoughts into words.
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0 Very well written. Though Sad, very well put thoughts into words. 0-
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0 I like this too, Anita. Very sad indeed... 02br
00Makes me think of "Irene" 02br
00You ever heard that song? 0-
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0 Hello 3pod 02br
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00Some of the rhymes are not quite right: 02br
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00poet/write it. 02br
00ruby/see 02br
00dream/me 02br
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0 Did you mean the Leadbelly song, Pieanne? 02br
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00MrP 0-
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0 I don't know, I only know the Michelle Shocked version. 02br
00It goes 02br
00"Sometimes I live in the country, sometimes I live in the town 02br
00Sometimes I get a great notion to jump in the river and drown" 0-
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0 That's the one – 02br
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00Last Saturday night, I got married, 02br
00me and my wife settled down 02br
00Now me and my wife are parted, 02br
00I'm gonna take another stroll downtown 02br
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00Sometimes I live in the country, 02br
00sometimes I live in town 02br
00Sometimes I ta
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0 Thank you. It's the same, but the lyrics are somewhat altered in the version I know. 02br
00Yes, curious concept! I hope they offer toilet paper as well. 0-
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0Good poem, Threepod. You seem to have mastered English 050010id5
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0 No, Abbie, a freind she help me.I say her all my feelings, and she writes. 0-
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0 Good day, M PD 02br
00I read your message before, and i not write the poeme me, you can to help perhaps? Invent things who rhyme? 0-
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