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JimmyH Posted 13 years ago
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for instilling in us a sense of..

I owe him a huge thank you for instilling in us a sense of patriotism and reviving faith among us countrymen when we had lost hope for our country.

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I think us countrymen sounds a little awkward. You could say reviving our faith when we had lost hope for our country. reviving faith among us when we had lost hope for our country .

  • I think us countrymen sounds a little awkward.
  • You could say reviving our faith when we had lost hope for our country.
  • reviving faith among us when we had lost hope for our country .
  • reviving faith among our countrymen when they had lost hope for our country.
  • reviving faith among his countrymen when they had lost hope for our country.
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I think us countrymen sounds a little awkward. You could say
reviving our faith when we had lost hope for our country.
reviving faith among us when we had lost hope for our country.
reviving faith among our countrymen when they had lost hope for our country.
reviving faith among his countrymen when they had lost hope for our country.

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