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Son James Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
For contradiction on words "Nuclear Umbrella"
* Please check my writing and correct wrong parts or sentences into right ones. Thank you in advance for your teaching.
For contradiction on words "Nuclear Umbrella",
Today I saw it on a newspaper. If North Korea attacks us by nuclear weapon, America will instead of us shoot nuclear missile to North Korea.
Now American nuclear submarine is under the sea of ours. Our government has announced we're protected by the programme of "Unclear Umbrella".
Let's think for statue with "Unclear Umbrella" a little more.
If North Korea first attack us, It is saying that we has to get a damage from unclear weapon first.
As you see the full extent of Japanese damage caused in the World War 2, up to now there are some people crying for its pain and damage.
After harming such a big damage, what is the counter attack "nuclear Umbrella" used for?
Okay. Let's assume we should attack first when they have a certain foreshadower to use a nuclear weapon.
You know, the owner of that nuclear submarine is not us, it is American president's,which means whether when and why to push the button or not depends on all of the America's.
How tragical a life of our country is.
How can we let the other country's leader decide the future of our country?
When looking for its meaning in the Wiki, "Nuclear Umbrella" defines a guarantee by a nuclear weapon state to defend a non-nuclear allied state.
I'd like to ask America how can you guarantee that you can protect us against nuclear weapons.
Attack first? the counter attack shortly after our getting a nuclear weapon? neither can be a reasonable solution.
It is only concluding a peace agreement.
Furthermore, due to a dispute between North Korea and America, I don't want to stand our country has to become a battlefield.
Because the people who would get damage is Korean.
For contradiction on words "Nuclear Umbrella",
Today I saw it on a newspaper. If North Korea attacks us by nuclear weapon, America will instead of us shoot nuclear missile to North Korea.
Now American nuclear submarine is under the sea of ours. Our government has announced we're protected by the programme of "Unclear Umbrella".
Let's think for statue with "Unclear Umbrella" a little more.
If North Korea first attack us, It is saying that we has to get a damage from unclear weapon first.
As you see the full extent of Japanese damage caused in the World War 2, up to now there are some people crying for its pain and damage.
After harming such a big damage, what is the counter attack "nuclear Umbrella" used for?
Okay. Let's assume we should attack first when they have a certain foreshadower to use a nuclear weapon.
You know, the owner of that nuclear submarine is not us, it is American president's,which means whether when and why to push the button or not depends on all of the America's.
How tragical a life of our country is.
How can we let the other country's leader decide the future of our country?
When looking for its meaning in the Wiki, "Nuclear Umbrella" defines a guarantee by a nuclear weapon state to defend a non-nuclear allied state.
I'd like to ask America how can you guarantee that you can protect us against nuclear weapons.
Attack first? the counter attack shortly after our getting a nuclear weapon? neither can be a reasonable solution.
It is only concluding a peace agreement.
Furthermore, due to a dispute between North Korea and America, I don't want to stand our country has to become a battlefield.
Because the people who would get damage is Korean.
Top answer
Hi SJ I liked your piece. I can't really correct it, point by point, but here is how an English writer might put it (with as little change to your writing as possible) ... Best regards, Dave The “Nuclear Umbrella” is a self-contradiction Today I read in a newspaper: if North Korea attack us with nuclear weapons, America will, on our behalf, fire nuclear missiles at North Korea.
- Hi SJ I liked your piece.
- I can't really correct it, point by point, but here is how an English writer might put it (with as little change to your writing as possible) ...
- Best regards, Dave The “Nuclear Umbrella” is a self-contradiction Today I read in a newspaper: if North Korea attack us with nuclear weapons, America will, on our behalf, fire nuclear missiles at North Korea.
- That is why an American nuclear submarine is under our seas.
- Our government has announced that we're protected by the programme of the "Nuclear Umbrella".
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Hi SJ
I liked your piece. I can't really correct it, point by point, but here is how an English writer might put it (with as little change to your writing as possible) ...
Best regards, Dave
I liked your piece. I can't really correct it, point by point, but here is how an English writer might put it (with as little change to your writing as possible) ...
Best regards, Dave
The “Nuclear Umbrella” is a self-contradiction
Today I read in a newspaper: if North Korea attack us with nuclear weapons, America will, on our behalf, fire nuclear missil
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I really thank you so much for your writing. I have found there are a lot of errors in my writing compared to yours.
The reason why I wrote this here is that I want to learn how to connect a sentence into another sentence. It is so difficult for me. Because once I repair a sentence, I feel I need to repair next sentence either all the time. I mean, I don't know how to make the context in my wr
The reason why I wrote this here is that I want to learn how to connect a sentence into another sentence. It is so difficult for me. Because once I repair a sentence, I feel I need to repair next sentence either all the time. I mean, I don't know how to make the context in my wr
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