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Tural Musayev Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

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could you please check the grammar mistake? are they formal

I am writing to inform you that I have the machine as you requested.

For further details about it please see below information.
Please let me know if the machine's technical specifications are suitable for you then I will send the bid to you.
  

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"I am writing to inform you that I have the machine as you requested" 1. Misstake is that you are writing in first person, hence making it informal. " Please let me know if the machine's technical specifications are suitable for you then I will send the bid to you.

— Zagros bingöl

  • "I am writing to inform you that I have the machine as you requested" 1.
  • Misstake is that you are writing in first person, hence making it informal.
  • " Please let me know if the machine's technical specifications are suitable for you then I will send the bid to you.
  • " 2.
  • Be neutral in formal letters.
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"I am writing to inform you that I have the machine as you requested"
1. Misstake is that you are writing in first person, hence making it informal.
"

Please let me know if the machine's technical specifications are suitable for you then I will send the bid to you.

"

2. Be neutral in formal letters.

Rewrite:
Hello "name",
The machine you request
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