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Victo Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

For Aspara Gus (or others) ...

Paying attention to the punctuation following the words 'about myself' in each passage below, which one is correct per logical punctuation? I say that sentence #1 is correct.

1. “I know it sounds crazy to say that running for president is minor, but in the grand scheme of things, it was looking at Mary Pat and the kids and going: ‘I have to do this for them, even if I don't give a **** about myself’”, he told the New York Post.

2. “I know it sounds crazy to say that running for president is minor, but in the grand scheme of things, it was looking at Mary Pat and the kids and going: ‘I have to do this for them, even if I don't give a **** about myself’,” he told the New York Post.

3. “I know it sounds crazy to say that running for president is minor, but in the grand scheme of things, it was looking at Mary Pat and the kids and going: ‘I have to do this for them, even if I don't give a **** about myself,’” he told the New York Post.

Thank you.
  

Top answer

Anybody agree with me that #1 is the best of the three?

  • Anybody agree with me that #1 is the best of the three?
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Anybody agree with me that #1 is the best of the three?
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We don't get to make up our own punctuation rules.
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Do you agree, Aspara Gus, with my choice below?

1. “I know it sounds crazy to say that running for president is minor, but in the grand scheme of things, it was looking at Mary, Pat and the kids and going: ‘I have to do this for them, even if I don't give a **** about myself’”, he told the New York Post.

Thanks.
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Yes. As I’ve said a few times before, I prefer to place commas outside quotation marks when they don’t belong with the quoted material.

That colon is wrong, by the way.
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Aspara GusAs I’ve said a few times before, ...
... and will probably be called on to say a few times more.

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