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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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For a wedding speech

For a wedding speech
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My dad was as involved in our weeding, helping with everything as if it was his own. I would like to thank him for all he has done.
  

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Hi, 'As involved' suggests you are comparing him to someone else who as also involved. Maybe you should delete 'as'? The word 'weeding ' suggests you are talking about his skills in the garden.

— Clive

  • Hi, 'As involved' suggests you are comparing him to someone else who as also involved.
  • Maybe you should delete 'as'?
  • The word 'weeding ' suggests you are talking about his skills in the garden.
  • Was he also involved in the wedding ?
  • Clive
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Hi,

'As involved' suggests you are comparing him to someone else who as also involved. Maybe you should delete 'as'?

The word 'weeding' suggests you are talking about his skills in the garden. Was he also involved in the wedding?
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