Football

Hello guys,

Can you people do a favor to me?
I just wrote an essay about football (or should it be soccer?) and I really need help of people who're native english, or are as good as people who can speak/write english on a high level.

Here the essay comes:

Football

Football is a well known sport. The sport is based on endurance, eye-ball coordination and some skill. But don’t make this scare you, young and old everyone can play it. In this essay I’m going to tell you why football is importmant these days in life.

Football is a sport which is very good to stay in perfect condition. It;s a sport based on stamina even though you don’t have the stamina a football player needs, you can create it. And while you’re training to gain endurance you’re making your body look and feel, physically and mentally stronger which improves your health.

Furthermore it’s very amusing to people. As you can feel the adrenaline in your veins when a striker kicks the ball and sees the ball heads forward to goal. Everybody is ready to put his arms up and celebrate but the goalkeeper catches the ball. You need to feel this while watching football or you won’t understand the feeling ‘real spectators’ get.

Also it has become a branch of gambling. You can see people who bet hundreds of dollars by betting on their favorite team, in the hope of making big money. Some people make big money indeed, but others return home with nothing more than nothing. This doesn’t only occur in this land but it happens all over the world.

So if we summarize the above we can see it’s good for the people who play it, physically and mentally. It’s very amusing to watch and it entertains you if you know the meaning of it. ito pens a whole new branch of business for gamblers. I agree to this all and I say that you need to try it atleast once for yourself.

With friendly regards,

Me