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Quaerereverum Posted 15 years ago
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Food has become easier to cook.
Would you be so kind to proofread my paragraph.
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? In my view, even though it is easier to cook the quality of our life has not got better for 2 reasons. First, people get used to being lazy because it is easier to heat pizza, and frozen food in microwaves than cook from scratch; therefore many people are overweight. Second, people are used to convenience so that they don't know how to cook. For example: many pleople don't know how to prepare healthy food, because either they eat out or buy ready-made food. Therefore, many people in the west are suffering from diabetes and obesity .
Thank you for your help.
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? In my view, even though it is easier to cook the quality of our life has not got better for 2 reasons. First, people get used to being lazy because it is easier to heat pizza, and frozen food in microwaves than cook from scratch; therefore many people are overweight. Second, people are used to convenience so that they don't know how to cook. For example: many pleople don't know how to prepare healthy food, because either they eat out or buy ready-made food. Therefore, many people in the west are suffering from diabetes and obesity .
Thank you for your help.
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I have underlined problem areas and struck out unnecessary verbiage. In future, please do not put preformatted material into a post, as it is difficult to read. Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.
- I have underlined problem areas and struck out unnecessary verbiage.
- In future, please do not put preformatted material into a post, as it is difficult to read.
- Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare.
- Has this change improved the way people live?
- In my view , even though it is easier to c ook th e quality of our life has not got better for 2 reasons.
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I have underlined problem areas and struck out unnecessary verbiage. In future, please do not put preformatted material into a post, as it is difficult to read.
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?In my view, even though it is easier to cook the quality of our life has not got better for 2 reaso
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
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