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Nguyên Ngọc Trần Posted 7 years ago
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Food for students about continuing to use pork (pig)

Due to cholera outbreaks in African, Sakura Kindergarten has suspended use of pork and pork products on the menu to make sure health for students from March 16, 2019.
So far, the cholera outbreak controlled, almost no new outbreaks appear.
Food suppliers for Fresco students have many measures to control the source of pork on farms to make sure that no contamination is present, the slaughter process performed in modern lines, ISO standards 22000: 2005.
Therefore, starting on April 22, 201 Sakura Kindergarten started using pork and pork products (pigs). In the beginning, pork and pork products will use with a frequency of 2 dishes/week, then continue to check and gradually increase to use as a normal menu.

  

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Your writing has many grammatical problems. Due to cholera outbreaks in African , (Wrong form) Sakura Kindergarten has suspended the use of pork and pork products on the menu to make sure health for students (ungrammatical) from March 16, 2019. So far, the cholera outbreak controlled , (ungrammatical clause) almost no new outbreaks appear .

  • Your writing has many grammatical problems.
  • Due to cholera outbreaks in African , (Wrong form) Sakura Kindergarten has suspended the use of pork and pork products on the menu to make sure health for students (ungrammatical) from March 16, 2019.
  • So far, the cholera outbreak controlled , (ungrammatical clause) almost no new outbreaks appear .
  • ) students have many measures to control the production source of pork on farms to make sure that no contamination is presen t, (comma splice error) the slaughter process (missing word) performed in modern lines, ISO standards 22000: 2005.
  • Therefore, starting on April 22, 201 Sakura Kindergarten started using pork and pork products (pigs) .
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Your writing has many grammatical problems.


Due to cholera outbreaks in African, (Wrong form) Sakura Kindergarten has suspended the use of pork and pork products on the menu to make sure health for students (ungrammatical) from March 16, 2019.
So far,

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