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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Food chains
Would anyone be kind enough to check the following paragraph for me? thanks!
Many people think that McDonald was founded by Ray A. Kroc. But it’s not true. In fact, Ray A. Kroc let McDonald enhance and glorify and extend to the world. In 1948, McDonald brothers founded their first fast food restaurant. They started to sell from the hot dog, and finally gradually transformed into the fast food chains to sell fries. The two brothers had the ability to found McDonald career, but they don’t have ability to make McDonald enhanced and glorious!
Many people think that McDonald was founded by Ray A. Kroc. But it’s not true. In fact, Ray A. Kroc let McDonald enhance and glorify and extend to the world. In 1948, McDonald brothers founded their first fast food restaurant. They started to sell from the hot dog, and finally gradually transformed into the fast food chains to sell fries. The two brothers had the ability to found McDonald career, but they don’t have ability to make McDonald enhanced and glorious!
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