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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Following is my self-introduce for tomorrow's interview,I hope this introduce will lasts 3 to 5 minutes. Welcome everybody to put forward the suggestion
Good afternoon Sir!!
Thank you for giving me an opportunity to introduce myself.
My name is Shreya Malot. I belong from Banswara, Rajasthan. Currently I am in final year B.Tech and my branch is computer science.
As I am part of nuclear family I have become self-independent person.
Being a dancer I have quality of being agile and ability to remain focused on my work. Dancing also made me moving in delibrate and disciplined way in my life.
Having stayed in hostle from previous 5 years, has made me a flexible person. I am also a self-motivated and hard-worker.
Since teaching mathematics is also my passion, so it makes me more analytical person.
During my summer training I have deal with many projects which helped me in improving my technical skills. And I have seen myself as a people-oriented and over-achiever person.
I also have participated in many events held in my college. I am part of Robotics society of my college which helps me in improving my software as well as hardware skills.
My short term goal is to join your organization and enhance my skills. My long term goal is to see your organization at peak level where I am one of the person responsible for it.
Thank you for giving me an opportunity to introduce myself.
My name is Shreya Malot. I belong from Banswara, Rajasthan. Currently I am in final year B.Tech and my branch is computer science.
As I am part of nuclear family I have become self-independent person.
Being a dancer I have quality of being agile and ability to remain focused on my work. Dancing also made me moving in delibrate and disciplined way in my life.
Having stayed in hostle from previous 5 years, has made me a flexible person. I am also a self-motivated and hard-worker.
Since teaching mathematics is also my passion, so it makes me more analytical person.
During my summer training I have deal with many projects which helped me in improving my technical skills. And I have seen myself as a people-oriented and over-achiever person.
I also have participated in many events held in my college. I am part of Robotics society of my college which helps me in improving my software as well as hardware skills.
My short term goal is to join your organization and enhance my skills. My long term goal is to see your organization at peak level where I am one of the person responsible for it.
Top answer
Hi That's clear. There are parts of it that need to change. In terms of meaning, I think I would not describe myself as an over-achiever.
- Hi That's clear.
- There are parts of it that need to change.
- In terms of meaning, I think I would not describe myself as an over-achiever.
- That doesn't usually have a good meaning: "I think too highly of myself and care more about my own career than supporting other people in the team".
- Without too many changes, this is how I might write it ...
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Hi
That's clear. There are parts of it that need to change. In terms of meaning, I think I would not describe myself as an over-achiever. That doesn't usually have a good meaning: "I think too highly of myself and care more about my own career than supporting other people in the team". Without too many changes, this is how I might write it ...
Good afternoon Sir!
Thank yo
That's clear. There are parts of it that need to change. In terms of meaning, I think I would not describe myself as an over-achiever. That doesn't usually have a good meaning: "I think too highly of myself and care more about my own career than supporting other people in the team". Without too many changes, this is how I might write it ...
Good afternoon Sir!
Thank yo
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