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Kumenglish Posted 7 years ago
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Following

In the context I am asking the client to select a desired design from number of options.

Following the completion of the logo design, I am sending you a three options of logo designs for your approval. If you could select your desired design from them, i would appreciate it and deliver it to you. Please see the attached file.

Please suggest the sentence and check these words "following" and "desired(adjective)" Are these suitable in this context?

  

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Following the completion of the logo design, I am sending you a three options of logo designs for your approval. If you could select your desired design from them, i would appreciate it and deliver it to you. Please see the attached file.

  • Following the completion of the logo design, I am sending you a three options of logo designs for your approval.
  • If you could select your desired design from them, i would appreciate it and deliver it to you.
  • Please see the attached file.
  • The logo design doesn't sound really complete if the client has yet to select one.
  • 'preferred' is better than 'desired'.
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Following the completion of the logo design, I am sending you a three options of logo designs for your approval. If you could select your desired design from them, i would appreciate it and deliver it to you. Please see the attached file.

The logo design doesn't sound really complete if the client has yet to select one.

'preferred' is better than 'desired'.

I suggest t

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Following the completion of the logo design, I am sending you a three options of logo designs for your approval. If you could select your desired design from them, i would appreciate it and deliver it to you. Please see the attached file.


It is a very awkward email. "a" is never used with t

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