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Emerald 108 Posted 7 years ago
Apologies for the late response. I was waiting for a feedback on our discussion on an increase in the salary to (****). In the mail I received, you stated that you would discuss the development with Mrs xxxx to consider the offer. It was the feedback from your discussion with her that I have been waiting for when I received your mail yesterday.
Letter Writing
Follow up letters for Salary Increment
Good morning ma'am,
Apologies for the late response. I was waiting for a feedback on our discussion on an increase in the salary to (****). In the mail I received, you stated that you would discuss the development with Mrs xxxx to consider the offer. It was the feedback from your discussion with her that I have been waiting for when I received your mail yesterday.
I really would love to work with the team but I would appreciate if the payment is looked into.
Yours sincerely,
*****
Please is this letter official enough?
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Emerald 108 Please is this letter official enough? It may be your "official" response - that is the one you will defend as your own. But the English is faulty and it has a distinctly informal or casual tone.
- Emerald 108 Please is this letter official enough?
- It may be your "official" response - that is the one you will defend as your own.
- But the English is faulty and it has a distinctly informal or casual tone.
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Emerald 108Please is this letter official enough?
It may be your "official" response - that is the one you will defend as your own.
But the English is faulty and it has a distinctly informal or casual tone.
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