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Enrich Publication Posted 12 years ago
Business & Finance
Follow-up email
Hi Experts,
I had written to some organizations introducing my company but haven't heard back from them. I want to write a follow up mail. Could you please check the following:
Dear Mr. ABC,
Hope you are well.
This mail is with reference to the mail sent to you on xx June, morning introducing our work and services. I would be grateful if you could share your views and feedback.
I look forward to your email. Hope to get a chance to work with you soon.
Regards,
XXX
I had written to some organizations introducing my company but haven't heard back from them. I want to write a follow up mail. Could you please check the following:
Dear Mr. ABC,
Hope you are well.
This mail is with reference to the mail sent to you on xx June, morning introducing our work and services. I would be grateful if you could share your views and feedback.
I look forward to your email. Hope to get a chance to work with you soon.
Regards,
XXX
Top answer
Your email is excellent, but unfortunately I can't help feeling that they aren't interested in your work or services and are impolite enough not to reply. They'll probably ignore your follow-up, too, but it won't cost you anything to send it. I'd rephrase this part: With reference to the email sent to you on xx June introducing our work and services , I would be grateful if you could share your views and feedback.
- Your email is excellent, but unfortunately I can't help feeling that they aren't interested in your work or services and are impolite enough not to reply.
- They'll probably ignore your follow-up, too, but it won't cost you anything to send it.
- I'd rephrase this part: With reference to the email sent to you on xx June introducing our work and services , I would be grateful if you could share your views and feedback.
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Your email is excellent, but unfortunately I can't help feeling that they aren't interested in your work or services and are impolite enough not to reply.
They'll probably ignore your follow-up, too, but it won't cost you anything to send it.
I'd rephrase this part:
With reference to the email sent to you on xx June introducing our
They'll probably ignore your follow-up, too, but it won't cost you anything to send it.
I'd rephrase this part:
With reference to the email sent to you on xx June introducing our
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I agree with you. They aren't interested, but have to follow-up.
Thank you for the rephrasing the mail for me.
Thank you for the rephrasing the mail for me.
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