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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

Follow up email

Please help me to edit this email.

Dear Dr.Fenske,

I hope my email finds you well. It's been a week since we exchanged emails and you instructed me to contact dr.Martin for the volunteer position at his lab. I emailed dr.Martin last Friday but up until now I haven't got any response. Should I wait more for his response or should I try to emila dr.Ali as well ?

Thank you,
  

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The abbreviation Dr. should be capitalized and a space should go between it and the last name. Martin last Friday but up until now I haven't got any response.

— Shawn79

  • The abbreviation Dr.
  • should be capitalized and a space should go between it and the last name.
  • Martin last Friday but up until now I haven't got any response.
  • Instead of "up until now" try a simple adverb like "still" or "yet" or "so far".
  • " but I suggest avoiding the word altogether.
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The abbreviation Dr. should be capitalized and a space should go between it and the last name.
Aj Redhwan I emailed dr.Martin last Friday but up until now I haven't got any response.
Instead of "up until now" try a simple adverb like "still" or "yet" or "so far". Also, the past participle of "to get" is "gotten" so it should be "I haven't gotten...
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