Focussed on vs focusing on

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I would also like to engage in research and contribute to the effective design of software, (focused/focusing) on systems-oriented.

Or is it better to use 'particularly' rather than focused on/focusing on?

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

fyr3foxI would also like to engage in research and contribute to the effective design of software, (focused/focusing) on systems-oriented. Or is it better to use 'particularly' rather than focused on/focusing on?

I would also like to engage in research and contribute to the effective design of software, focusing on systems-oriented (?).

I would also like to engage in research and contribute to the effective design of software, particularly systems-oriented (?).

Either is OK, but you need something (a noun) after systems-oriented.

Fyr3fox · Answer

Thanks, it's solved.

Clive · Answer

Hi,

I would also like to engage in research and contribute to the effective design of software . . .

A small extra comment.

'Contribute to' seems a rather weak phrase to me.

You might consider -

I would also like to engage in research and design effective software . . .

Clive

Fyr3fox · Answer

Yeah, this is indeed much 'effective'

Mewosh · Answer

You can use focusing on OR with focus on

I smell personal statement for Computer Science - which uni?

Fyr3fox · Answer

Yeah

.. you too?
anyways, not the right area for personal chat ..

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