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Evo25 Posted 17 years ago
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Focuses on providing
1)This series of PCs is focusing on provides young gamers with high performance, smooth graphic, eye catching design, and excellent internet experience.
2)This series of PCs focuses on providing young gamers with high performance, smooth graphic, eye catching design, and excellent internet experience.
Are both of these sentences above correct?
Thanks for helping.
2)This series of PCs focuses on providing young gamers with high performance, smooth graphic, eye catching design, and excellent internet experience.
Are both of these sentences above correct?
Thanks for helping.
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Neither is exactly correct. I suggest using this: 2) This series of PCs focuses on providing young gamers with high performance, smooth graphics , eye-catching design, and an excellent internet experience.
- Neither is exactly correct.
- I suggest using this: 2) This series of PCs focuses on providing young gamers with high performance, smooth graphics , eye-catching design, and an excellent internet experience.
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Neither is exactly correct. I suggest using this:
2) This series of PCs focuses on providing young gamers with high performance, smooth graphics, eye-catching design, and an excellent internet experience.
2) This series of PCs focuses on providing young gamers with high performance, smooth graphics, eye-catching design, and an excellent internet experience.
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