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Kumenglish Posted 4 years ago
Grammar

Focus

We are working with a focus on development in our careers.

We are focusing on our work to develop our careers.

Please check them.

Do they give the same meaning?

  

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Hi Yes, they are both good and say the same thing. In a case like this, I would choose the one with more verbs (the second) because readers find them slightly easier to take in. Also, in the second one, you don't need 'our' twice - We are focusing on work to develop our careers.

  • Hi Yes, they are both good and say the same thing.
  • In a case like this, I would choose the one with more verbs (the second) because readers find them slightly easier to take in.
  • Also, in the second one, you don't need 'our' twice - We are focusing on work to develop our careers.
  • Dave
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Hi

Yes, they are both good and say the same thing. In a case like this, I would choose the one with more verbs (the second) because readers find them slightly easier to take in. Also, in the second one, you don't need 'our' twice

- We are focusing on work to develop our careers.

Dave

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