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Pamela81 Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Flowerpots and sizes
Dear All,
please I need a correction.
"Dear xxx,
we highly advise to order the plants and then let us know the sizes of the pots where they are planted (??) fixed??? so that we can produce the flowerpots which will be containing them and be sure that they will be fitting the plants´dimensions at 100% (by 100%??). "
Please correct and specify the reasons why my sentences can not be accepted.
Thanks
PAMELA
please I need a correction.
"Dear xxx,
we highly advise to order the plants and then let us know the sizes of the pots where they are planted (??) fixed??? so that we can produce the flowerpots which will be containing them and be sure that they will be fitting the plants´dimensions at 100% (by 100%??). "
Please correct and specify the reasons why my sentences can not be accepted.
Thanks
PAMELA
Top answer
I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix them and post your revision: Dear ***, we highly advise to order the plants and then let us know the sizes of the pots where they are pl anted so that we can produce the flowerpots which will be containing them and be sure that they will be fitting the plants´dimensions.
- I have underlined some problem areas.
- Please fix them and post your revision: Dear ***, we highly advise to order the plants and then let us know the sizes of the pots where they are pl anted so that we can produce the flowerpots which will be containing them and be sure that they will be fitting the plants´dimensions.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Please fix them and post your revision:
Dear ***,
we highly advise to order the plants and then let us know the sizes of the pots where they are planted so that we can produce the flowerpots which will be containing them and be sure that they will be fitting the plants´dimension
Dear ***,
we highly advise to order the plants and then let us know the sizes of the pots where they are planted so that we can produce the flowerpots which will be containing them and be sure that they will be fitting the plants´dimension
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Hi,
I am not sure being able to revise my text since I do not know why the things underlined are wrong. I tried by removing some words (which maybe were useless verbiage) and by replacing them with different ones. I am not sure, I repeat that this correction will work. Thanks for checking!!!!
"Dear ***,
our suggestion is to order the plants and then let us know the sizes
I am not sure being able to revise my text since I do not know why the things underlined are wrong. I tried by removing some words (which maybe were useless verbiage) and by replacing them with different ones. I am not sure, I repeat that this correction will work. Thanks for checking!!!!
"Dear ***,
our suggestion is to order the plants and then let us know the sizes
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Good idea, and with great success!
Dear ***,
Our suggestion is to order the plants and then let us know the sizes of the pots so that we can fabricate the flowerpots and be sure that they fit the plants' dimensions.
Dear ***,
Our suggestion is to order the plants and then let us know the sizes of the pots so that we can fabricate the flowerpots and be sure that they fit the plants' dimensions.
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