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Kumenglish Posted 4 years ago
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Context: Team members are celebrating the winning moment.

Team members are punching the air to show their celebration after winning the match.

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There are two possible fixes for your sentence because we don't "show celebration". The celebration is the show. 1) Team members are punching the air to show their joy after winning the match.

  • There are two possible fixes for your sentence because we don't "show celebration".
  • The celebration is the show.
  • 1) Team members are punching the air to show their joy after winning the match.
  • 2) Team members are punching the air to celebrate winning the match.
  • a) You can substitute 'enthusiasm' or 'excitement' for 'joy'.
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There are two possible fixes for your sentence because we don't "show celebration". The celebration is the show.

1) Team members are punching the air to show their joy after winning the match.

2) Team members are punching the air to celebrate winning the match.


a) You can substitute 'enthusiasm' or 'excitement' for 'joy'.
b) You can substitute 'at' for

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