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Flickering light

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On May 25, 2012, Jack, Tina and I climbed up Yangmingshan to explore the vestige of legendary UFO base. We walked for a long time to arrive our destination. As we took a break for a moment on the way, suddenly, I noticed a strange disk-shaped flight vehicle with flickering light flying high up in the far sky. I exclaimed in astonishment, “ Look!Everybody, it must be a UFO.” While it was flying over the mountain, I picked up my digital camera to take pictures of the UFO. After I made a turn, it had been disappeared. However, I knew it was definitely a UFO.
  

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On May 25, 2012, Jack, Tina and I climbed up Yangmingshan to explore the vestige of a legendary UFO base. We had to for a long time to arrive at our destination. As we took a momentary break on the wa y, I suddenly noticed a strange disk-shaped flying vehicle with flickering light high up in the far sky.

  • On May 25, 2012, Jack, Tina and I climbed up Yangmingshan to explore the vestige of a legendary UFO base.
  • We had to for a long time to arrive at our destination.
  • As we took a momentary break on the wa y, I suddenly noticed a strange disk-shaped flying vehicle with flickering light high up in the far sky.
  • I exclaimed in astonishment, “ Look, everybody!
  • It must be a UFO !
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On May 25, 2012, Jack, Tina and I climbed up Yangmingshan to explore the vestige of a legendary UFO base. We had to for a long time to arrive at our destination. As we took a momentary break on the way, I suddenly noticed a strange disk-shaped flying vehicle with flickering light high up in the far sky. I exclaimed in astonishment, “ Look, everyb

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