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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary
Flashback help??
I am frozen like when I sliced my finger while trying to open a can of peaches. Like when I watched a scary movie at Lorianne's house. Like when I fell off my bike that one summer.
I want to convey a series of flashbacks where the narrator is 'frozen' in fear in. How do I achieve this while keeping the flow of 'like'? Would this flow make sense grammatically?
I want to convey a series of flashbacks where the narrator is 'frozen' in fear in. How do I achieve this while keeping the flow of 'like'? Would this flow make sense grammatically?
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This is creative writing, not essay writing. For that reason you don't need to worry as much about incomplete sentences. What you have is fine.
- This is creative writing, not essay writing.
- For that reason you don't need to worry as much about incomplete sentences.
- What you have is fine.
- CJ
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This is creative writing, not essay writing. For that reason you don't need to worry as much about incomplete sentences. What you have is fine.
CJ
CJ
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