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The bar graph illustrates the percentage of male and female had physical activity of many ages in 2010 from Australian.

Overall, female was only higher than female in 15 ages to 24 ages. By contrast, the percentage of male attended physical action was less than the number of female from 25 ages to 65 and over ages.

As the graph shows the amount of female was highest bout 52.8 % in 15 ages to 24 ages. The trend had decline slightly about 42.2% to 39.5% in 25 ages to 44 ages in men. By contrast, the number of female focused on physical action increase sharply about 47.7% to 53.3% from 15 ages to 54 ages. Additionally, in 55 ages to 65 and over ages of female had drop significantly about 53% to 47.1%. Whereas, with female had risen from 43.1% to 46.7% in 45 ages to 65 and over ages.