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Topic: Write a paragraph about the person you would like to become

Everyone has a dream in life, one of them can be becoming someone they want in the future, and so do I. First, I want to become a person who is good at English and can naturally communicate with native speakers. To do that, I need to set many goals for myself. I spend almost all my free time studying English, which can be in class or on the Internet. In my opinion, the Internet is a double-edged sword. It can make you not concentrate on anything, because of many entertainment platforms like Tiktok, Youtube, and Spotify. But unless you utilize it effectively, this will be excellently convenient. In addition, I would like to become a breadwinner of the family. My family made many sacrifices so that I could study well. They encourage me to overcome difficulties in my study. Thus, I'll try my best for myself and my family. Furthermore, I want to become stronger and more independent in financial independence, skill life, and dynamic. And there is a famous quote that I will never forget: "You may delay, but time will not" and "If opportunity doesn’t knock, build a door". If we try our best, nothing is impossible. You can do it!