0
Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Grammar

fix my grammer

01.this year has been our most profitable yet,sales have increased 27% and expenses have been cut back 12%02br
02br
002.feeling unprepared for the interview, the questions were even more difficult than she expected them to be.02br
02br
003.there are many pictures of executives on the walls who have done oustanding work for the organization.02br
02br
004.some commonly conjoined pairs are ducks and geese,apples and orenges and ying and yang.02br
02br
005.both anger and crying may be expressions of the same emotion; frustration and not getting what we want. 0-
  

Top answer

0Hi Anon,02br 02br 00Is this a homework assignment? If so, you need to make an attempt first, and then we can help. 0-

  • 0Hi Anon,02br 02br 00Is this a homework assignment?
  • If so, you need to make an attempt first, and then we can help.
  • 0-
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

4 Answers
0
0Hi Anon,02br
02br
00Is this a homework assignment? If so, you need to make an attempt first, and then we can help. Remember that you should start you sentences with a capital letter.0-
0
0those were the attempts0-
0
0 i will lear english specialy at writing,please teach me...0-
0
0Okay then:02br
02br
00Here are my comments.02br
02br
001. Start with a capital letter. You hae a comma splice- you joined two complete thoughts with a comma. You need either a period or a semicolon (Sorry Clive.)02br
02br
002. Start with a capital letter. The way it's written, the questions felt unprepared. You need to say that SHE fel

Related Questions