Fix My first English diary 📔

Hello this is june from korea

I want to learn some english so badly

, so i tried to write a english diary for everyday ! Please fix my grammars , phrases and also vocabulary!!

2019.1.1

Today is the first day of 2019, new year

I spent time together with my girlfriend and my friend ‘yull’.

My friend ‘yull’ , she is my girlfriend’s friend at the first but now she is my friend also .

We bought some groceries and chicken .

After shopping we went to drinking place that we usually go .

There was bit noisy , but we can feel the party mood .

A lot of people was waiting for newyears in there .

After we drink , we went to Yull’s house

Her house was really big and antic

She lives there with her brother

She told us that her brother major is sound effect something (i don’t remember actually)

Till the newyear , we ate chicken and drank sparkling wine .

It was so memorable

On 12:00 o’ clock we celebrated and prayed our newyears luck .

When the party was over , we tried to sleep a bit until the sunrise

After a tiny nap , we woke up at 7:00 am

And we rushed to the lake where we planed to watching sunrise .

There were so many people that waiting for the sunrise .

Few minute later ,the sun rised behind of the clouds . It was so beautiful and hopeful

I wished my wish for newyears sun