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Vincent Teo Posted 13 years ago
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Fishing trip
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One day, Peter, Lim and John went fishing. They all brought all the fishing gear and put them under a shady tree. An hour later, they caught some fish. At night, they started to collect dry / dried wood to make a fire. They cooked the fish over / on the fire. They grilled the fish over the fire. They enjoyed eating it very much. It was full of fun.
One day, Peter, Lim and John went fishing. They all brought all the fishing gear and put them under a shady tree. An hour later, they caught some fish. At night, they started to collect dry / dried wood to make a fire. They cooked the fish over / on the fire. They grilled the fish over the fire. They enjoyed eating it very much. It was full of fun.
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One day, Peter, Lim and John went fishing. They all brought their fishing gear and put it under a shady tree. An hour later, they had caught some fish.
- One day, Peter, Lim and John went fishing.
- They all brought their fishing gear and put it under a shady tree.
- An hour later, they had caught some fish.
- At night, they started to collect dry wood to make a fire.
- They cooked/grilled the fish over the fire.
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One day, Peter, Lim and John went fishing. They all brought their fishing gear and put it under a shady tree. An hour later, they had caught some fish. At night, they started to collect dry wood to make a fire. They cooked/grilled the fish over the fire. They enjoyed eating it very much. It was fun.
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