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Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
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Fishing on a boat
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This summer, I’m going toCanadafor vacation. I will start off on July 15 and come back toTaiwanon July30. A first, I plan to enjoy the natural view of a beautiful lake, where it is famous for its tranquility and peace. I can get totally relaxed there. Then, I will go fishing on a boat in the lake while my sister takes her bike ride along the ring lake path. Fishing teaches me to be patient and being alone for hours. At night, I want to lie down on the grass with my sister to watch the stars in the sky. We even see a shooting star and make wishes before it is gone. I have a high expectation for the vacation and it will be an unforgettable experience.
This summer, I’m going toCanadafor vacation. I will start off on July 15 and come back toTaiwanon July30. A first, I plan to enjoy the natural view of a beautiful lake, where it is famous for its tranquility and peace. I can get totally relaxed there. Then, I will go fishing on a boat in the lake while my sister takes her bike ride along the ring lake path. Fishing teaches me to be patient and being alone for hours. At night, I want to lie down on the grass with my sister to watch the stars in the sky. We even see a shooting star and make wishes before it is gone. I have a high expectation for the vacation and it will be an unforgettable experience.
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