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Nikitus Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

First, we must create the atmosphere

Hello

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"First, we must create the atmosphere. You will be fundamental at that point, helping Clive to live the experience. We both can work the wisdom words that “Athenea” must tell to Clive."

Thanks!
  

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"First, we must create the atmosphere. You will be fundamental at that point, helping Clive to live the experience. " Why have you used quotes with Athenea?

  • "First, we must create the atmosphere.
  • You will be fundamental at that point, helping Clive to live the experience.
  • " Why have you used quotes with Athenea?
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"First, we must create the atmosphere. You will be fundamental at that point, helping Clive to live the experience. We both can work out the words of wisdom that “Athenea” must say to Clive."

Why have you used quotes with Athenea?
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NikitusYou will be fundamental
Nikituswork the wisdom words
What do those mean, Nikitus? They sound odd to me.
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Dear Clive:

First of all, thanks for your help.

I am using quotes with Athenea, because the woman who is speaking, will represent Athenea, making believe another guy (who will be drunk) that she is really Athenea, the greek divinity.

Thanks.
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Dear Mister Micawber:

First of all, thanks for your help.

The woman who is speaking, will represent Athenea, making believe another guy (who will be drunk) that she is really Athenea, the greek divinity.

First, we must create the atmosphere. You will be fundamental at that point

Context: They will create a staging, with smoke, noise and another elements, to real
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Nikitus: They will create a staging, with smoke, noise and another elements
Then, if you are not trying speak in a strange way and just want normal English, you need something like this:

First, we must set the stage. Your role will be critical in creating Clive's experience. We'll write your lines for Athena's speech to Clive.

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