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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing
First time writing a motivation letter. Need you help
Hey guys and girls.
This is the first time I post something here. I've seen you guys help a lot of people and it would be great if you could just read through this bit of text to see what you think.
Tekst (without my name, ...):
Concerning any current or future employment as a First Officer at Brussels Airlines.
Dear Mr./Ms. …,
I have great aspirations for the future of Brussels Airlines and would love to be part of the story. Ever since I was a few months old and made a first flight I forged a connection with aviation. I would love to share this passion with Brussels Airlines.
It is rare to find a leading European establishment that provides the prospects of a long interesting career and the dynamics of a young firm. The diverse fleet and varied destinations across Europe and Africa are very appealing to me. Contributing to a group that drives toward the further success of the company dominating Brussels Airport - the heart of the E.U. – will always be a dream of mine. (I'm not sure if the reason is visible in here, what do you guys think?)
I chose Sabena Flight Academy because they force you to go beyond what is required from a JAA pilot. Through their high level of experience I hope to offer the best of skills. This learning event, in combination with: my strong sense of responsibility, team spirit, flexibility, loyalty, and assertiveness could be of added value to Brussels Airlines.
In support of my application, I eagerly await your feedback. (I need something to say that i need to meet face to face in here)
Yours sincerely,
name
Thanks a lot
P.S.: I know it needs improving :-)
This is the first time I post something here. I've seen you guys help a lot of people and it would be great if you could just read through this bit of text to see what you think.
Tekst (without my name, ...):
Concerning any current or future employment as a First Officer at Brussels Airlines.
Dear Mr./Ms. …,
I have great aspirations for the future of Brussels Airlines and would love to be part of the story. Ever since I was a few months old and made a first flight I forged a connection with aviation. I would love to share this passion with Brussels Airlines.
It is rare to find a leading European establishment that provides the prospects of a long interesting career and the dynamics of a young firm. The diverse fleet and varied destinations across Europe and Africa are very appealing to me. Contributing to a group that drives toward the further success of the company dominating Brussels Airport - the heart of the E.U. – will always be a dream of mine. (I'm not sure if the reason is visible in here, what do you guys think?)
I chose Sabena Flight Academy because they force you to go beyond what is required from a JAA pilot. Through their high level of experience I hope to offer the best of skills. This learning event, in combination with: my strong sense of responsibility, team spirit, flexibility, loyalty, and assertiveness could be of added value to Brussels Airlines.
In support of my application, I eagerly await your feedback. (I need something to say that i need to meet face to face in here)
Yours sincerely,
name
Thanks a lot
P.S.: I know it needs improving :-)
Top answer
Zomg sorry guys, I made a huge spelling mistake in the title :-D I didn't write the "R" in "YOUR".
- Zomg sorry guys, I made a huge spelling mistake in the title :-D I didn't write the "R" in "YOUR".
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Zomg sorry guys, I made a huge spelling mistake in the title :-D I didn't write the "R" in "YOUR".
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Hi Just a quick word of advice. Not sure how long ago you submitted your letter and if you got the job or not. But you should really not cut and paste somebody else's cover letter. This letter has popped up on my desk at least 50 times in slighltly different wording in the past year or so.
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