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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
First Certificate From Spain!
Hello! My name is Noelia and I am sixteen. I`m spanish and I need some opinions about an essay. I´m taking The First Certificate of English next week, and honestly, I am a bit nervious 
The exam consist on five parts : Reading, Writing, Use of English, Speaking and Listening.
There´re very hard, and I have no problems with most of them, but I would like to show an essay related to the second part, Writing.
Please you must be honest because if my level is not good enough I would like to resolve the problem before this exam.Thank you very much. I´m looking forward to your answer!
Unfortunately it is true that money makes the world go round.Nowadays our society is moved by money and not by important things like respect, brotherhood,friendship or cooperation.
I think this circumstance is a pity, because if people base their lives in material things they do not see things that are worth. Furthermore money may finish and, what will these people do without it?
I believe we must be less materialist and judge people by what they are and not by what they have.
I Know changing people´s mind is difficult but we must do it. If we do not get that, all our lives will depend on the money.
Some people have already suffered the consequences of this situation:for example, they are not able to eat everyday and the south hemisferic is in a deep hollow of poverty.This is because only a few people have a lot of money and a lot of people have a little money.
I think we must resolve this problem because, honestly, it is completely unfair.
Thank you for your attention and see you at the forum!
The exam consist on five parts : Reading, Writing, Use of English, Speaking and Listening.There´re very hard, and I have no problems with most of them, but I would like to show an essay related to the second part, Writing.
Please you must be honest because if my level is not good enough I would like to resolve the problem before this exam.Thank you very much. I´m looking forward to your answer!
Unfortunately it is true that money makes the world go round.Nowadays our society is moved by money and not by important things like respect, brotherhood,friendship or cooperation.
I think this circumstance is a pity, because if people base their lives in material things they do not see things that are worth. Furthermore money may finish and, what will these people do without it?
I believe we must be less materialist and judge people by what they are and not by what they have.
I Know changing people´s mind is difficult but we must do it. If we do not get that, all our lives will depend on the money.
Some people have already suffered the consequences of this situation:for example, they are not able to eat everyday and the south hemisferic is in a deep hollow of poverty.This is because only a few people have a lot of money and a lot of people have a little money.
I think we must resolve this problem because, honestly, it is completely unfair.
Thank you for your attention and see you at the forum!
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Nowadays our society is controlled by money and not by important things like respect, brotherhood,friendship or cooperation. This is a pity, because if people base their lives on material things they do not appreciate the really valuable things. Furthermore, what will these people do when they run out of money ?
- Nowadays our society is controlled by money and not by important things like respect, brotherhood,friendship or cooperation.
- This is a pity, because if people base their lives on material things they do not appreciate the really valuable things.
- Furthermore, what will these people do when they run out of money ?
- I believe we must be less materialistic and judge people by who they are and not by what they have.
- I know changing people´s minds is difficult but we must do it.
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Unfortunately it is true that money makes the world go round.Nowadays our society is controlled by money and not by important things like respect, brotherhood,friendship or cooperation.
This is a pity, because if people base their lives on material things they do not appreciate the really valuable things.
This is a pity, because if people base their lives on material things they do not appreciate the really valuable things.
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