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Contiluo Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Firmly believe
Please check out the following sentences. Which is better?
(1) I firmly believe that there will be no success without efforts.
(2) I firmly believe that if you dont' work hard, you will not be sccessful.
(1) I firmly believe that there will be no success without efforts.
(2) I firmly believe that if you dont' work hard, you will not be sccessful.
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Hi, The first sentence could be improved if you said " hard efforts", or " serious efforts". As it stands there is a slight antclimax. I'd choose it over (2) with that addition.
- Hi, The first sentence could be improved if you said " hard efforts", or " serious efforts".
- As it stands there is a slight antclimax.
- I'd choose it over (2) with that addition.
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Hi,
The first sentence could be improved if you said "hard efforts", or "serious efforts". As it stands there is a slight antclimax. I'd choose it over (2) with that addition.
The first sentence could be improved if you said "hard efforts", or "serious efforts". As it stands there is a slight antclimax. I'd choose it over (2) with that addition.
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