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Eddy4200 Posted 17 years ago
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FINSIH THANKS!
Hi i have deadline tomorrow.The task is to present my product here is what i have written. Every time i do a writing task, I dont do it well my teacher said
. Well i hope people here can help me a lot
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“Easy to hold , Easy to eat”
We know what our customer need from us. Hungry Jacks have come up with a fancy way to wrapping your French fries. Most of our customer hate that their French fries fall out of the containers. Hating French fries is something that we have to end. The way to end the French fries problem, we have made a fancy new container. It is a useful container that prevents your French fries to fall out.
We give you people a new delouse way to eat your French fries, from Hungry Jacks.
The French fries containers make McDonald’s matchless against Hungry Jacks. Our containers would be the most sellable product to the customers.
The containers are made of plastic and it carries French fries inside. We take care of the environment, that’s why we made containers of recycle plastic. We know those French fries are hot when they are inside. We have made a solution for that problem; we have made many holes on the top of the containers, to let the steam out.
We want every customer of our to bring their food easily home. Our customer must enjoy their meal from Hungry Jacks. That’s why we say “Easy to hold, easy to eat”.
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. Well i hope people here can help me a lotStartFragment>
“Easy to hold , Easy to eat”
We know what our customer need from us. Hungry Jacks have come up with a fancy way to wrapping your French fries. Most of our customer hate that their French fries fall out of the containers. Hating French fries is something that we have to end. The way to end the French fries problem, we have made a fancy new container. It is a useful container that prevents your French fries to fall out.
We give you people a new delouse way to eat your French fries, from Hungry Jacks.
The French fries containers make McDonald’s matchless against Hungry Jacks. Our containers would be the most sellable product to the customers.
The containers are made of plastic and it carries French fries inside. We take care of the environment, that’s why we made containers of recycle plastic. We know those French fries are hot when they are inside. We have made a solution for that problem; we have made many holes on the top of the containers, to let the steam out.
We want every customer of our to bring their food easily home. Our customer must enjoy their meal from Hungry Jacks. That’s why we say “Easy to hold, easy to eat”.
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Try: “Easy to hold , Easy to eat” We know what our customers need from us. Hungry Jacks have come up with a fancy way of wrapping your French fries. Most of our customers hate it when their French fries fall out of their containers.
- Try: “Easy to hold , Easy to eat” We know what our customers need from us.
- Hungry Jacks have come up with a fancy way of wrapping your French fries.
- Most of our customers hate it when their French fries fall out of their containers.
- This is a problem we want to end, so we designed a fancy new container.
- It is a useful container that prevents your French fries from falling out.
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Try:
“Easy to hold , Easy to eat”
We know what our customers need from us. Hungry Jacks have come up with a fancy way of wrapping your French fries. Most of our customers hate it when their French fries fall out of their containers. This is a problem we want to end, so we designed a fancy new container. It is a useful container that prevents your French fries from falling out.
“Easy to hold , Easy to eat”
We know what our customers need from us. Hungry Jacks have come up with a fancy way of wrapping your French fries. Most of our customers hate it when their French fries fall out of their containers. This is a problem we want to end, so we designed a fancy new container. It is a useful container that prevents your French fries from falling out.
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thank you a lot to help me i m honored
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Easy to hold , Easy to eat”
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I don't understand why you did not take the excellent advice you were given.
And for ***'s sake, I don't know what you mean by "delouse" but a louse is a disgusting bug that lives in your hair, so figure out what word you mean instead of that. Maybe delux?
And for ***'s sake, I don't know what you mean by "delouse" but a louse is a disgusting bug that lives in your hair, so figure out what word you mean instead of that. Maybe delux?
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i meant something good u know if something taste good it is ""
OMG I SENDT IT TO MY TEACHER
OMG I SENDT IT TO MY TEACHER
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