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Yang5s1 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

'findings' of a study

Which of the following is not an acceptable sentence to describe the 'findings' of a study?

A. The number of cases of bullying in premier schools has increased by 15% from 60 cases in 2008 to 69 cases in 2009.
B. The number of cases of bullying in premier schools rose from 60 to 69 cases between 2008 and 2009.
C. The survey shows that premier schools recorded the highest increase (15%) in the cases of bullying between 2008 and 2009.
D. It may seem that the incidences of bullying in premier schools have increased alarmingly at 15 percent over the last year.

my answer is "D"
is that correct?

thanks
  

Top answer

In answer "D," the plural of incident is incidents. )

  • In answer "D," the plural of incident is incidents.
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In answer "D," the plural of incident is incidents. (This is a common mistake.)
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Dear friend,

'D' does not sound right. First, the word 'incidence' is almost exclusively singular in this meaning; second, 'increase' should be used in combination with 'by', not 'at'. Here is the rectified version:

It may seem that the incidence of bullying in premier schools has increased alarmingly
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Just when you think you know something....

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