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Adilsever Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Finding grammer errors

Search for the soul of a life's a tree there.
I have a mountain of body jewelry,
Search for the gem mine.
Search Hey walked to the Sufi can afford.
But not outside, looking for Search for itself ...
If you search for pearls in the mine, mine.
As the enthusiasm his piece of bread, bread.
We promise a closed understands, you know everything
what you are looking for
That person is you!

Please , write them if you find errors in the above poem.

Thanks
  

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I have underlined some problem areas. Basically, the structure is so poor that the relationship between words is uninterpretable. Post your revised version here and we will review it.

  • I have underlined some problem areas.
  • Basically, the structure is so poor that the relationship between words is uninterpretable.
  • Post your revised version here and we will review it.
  • Search for the soul of a life's a tree there.
  • I have a mountain of body jewelry, Search for the gem mine.
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I have underlined some problem areas. Basically, the structure is so poor that the relationship between words is uninterpretable. Post your revised version here and we will review it.

Search for the soul of a life's a tree there.
I have a mountain of body jewelry,
Search for the gem mine.
Search Hey walked to the Sufi can afford.
But no

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