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Preciousbunny Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Find to do ?
Finding the patrons to be very guidable,the waiter steered them to the most expensive items on the menu.
In this sentence, can I just say it in another way--> Finding the patrons that are very guidable, the waiter steered them to the most expensive items on the menu.
Why should I say find to do, I mean "find something to do " does it mean the thing you have discovered?
In this sentence, can I just say it in another way--> Finding the patrons that are very guidable, the waiter steered them to the most expensive items on the menu.
Why should I say find to do, I mean "find something to do " does it mean the thing you have discovered?
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In the second sentence, you're implying that the waiter has yet to find the patrons. That wouldn't work. "
- In the second sentence, you're implying that the waiter has yet to find the patrons.
- That wouldn't work.
- "
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In the second sentence, you're implying that the waiter has yet to find the patrons. That wouldn't work.
And for the first sentence, I think you might like this revision:
"The waiter found the patrons to be very guidable, so he steered them toward the most expensive items on the menu."
And for the first sentence, I think you might like this revision:
"The waiter found the patrons to be very guidable, so he steered them toward the most expensive items on the menu."
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